Wednesday 23 October 2013

Kayaking Day

Here is Sarah's recount about her kayaking trip over the weekend.  Look at how Sarah has added so much more in her edit.  http://docsstorybuilder.appspot.com/BVeYRj
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  1. Anonymous28 October 2013 at 13:39

    Nice story Sarah keep up the good work

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  2. Anonymous28 October 2013 at 13:47

    Hi It's room 23 WPS. We loved your story and it was really interesting. Also you had good punctuation.We hope you had a really good time.

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