Monday 21 October 2013

Shared Writing

Today we were revisiting how to write Recounts.  As a class we wrote a story together. CJ started it by telling us all about his recent trip to the bumper boats, and Mrs Power recorded it using the Story Builder website.
http://docsstorybuilder.appspot.com/

We then all helped add and improve the recount by adding describing words around the setting, making sure we had paragraphs, adding L4 punctuation, and even a simile!

We think that our class recount turned out great! You can watch it here
http://goo.gl/7hxZkq


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